Trial shoot

These images have been taken during the process of my makeup look to see if i need to enhance anything or add to my makeup look. After taking these photos i realised that the red on the eyes and cheeks needed to be made much darker as they were not coming out bright enough on the camera.

 Also i think the black tattoo designs around the eyes need to be sharper to stand out more.
I think the whole look is nice however it is not perfect and all the aspects of the design are too much together and maybe need to be split into 2 designs. I think the black tattoo designs and the scarring effect would work much better on plain natural skin, therefore the tattooing and scarring would stand out more and be the main focus of the editorial look. Looking at these photos show that there is a lot going on in the photo and i don't really know where to put my eyes and focus on so the red could be used on it own as a separate look,